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Post  RaikuAkioBld Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:19 am

Cute little thing I have on my Facfiction profile. Thought I might as well post it.





Girl: Do I ever cross your mind?

Boy: No

Girl: Do you like me?

Boy: No

Girl: Do you want me?

Boy: No

Girl: Would you cry if I left?

Boy: No

Girl: Would you live for me?

Boy: No

Girl: Would you do anything for me?

Boy: No

Girl: Choose--me or your life

Boy: My life

The girl runs away in shock and pain and the boy runs after her and says...

The reason you never cross my mind is because you're always on my mind.

The reason why I don't like you is because I love you.

The reason I don't want you is because I need you.

The reason I wouldn't cry if you left is because I would die if you left.

The reason I wouldn't live for you is because I would die for you.

The reason why I'm not willing to do you anything for you is because I would do everything for you.

The reason I chose my life is because you ARE my life.





Hope this inspired you to get married... In Perfect World... (How does that work?? Do you meet in real life? Or is it just a game thing?? This really confuses meh... Like you Richie... Do you even know Bloom in real life. You may find this offensive, please don't... You do not have to answer that... I just wanted to know... I'm UBER Confused. Someone shed some light on this subject?)
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Post  Gielgamesh Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:39 am

That was touching, Raiku.
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Post  RaikuAkioBld Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:22 pm

Heh, I didn't make it though... Maybe next time I'll make my own poem... Thanks for the Idea ^^
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Post  Gielgamesh Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:33 pm

Also, I hate to sound critical, but it's not really a poem.
It lacks a rythm, and you could still claim that it's free verse, but even then, that would be a strech.

Oh well, it's still nice.
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Post  RaikuAkioBld Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:13 am

Yeam I know... I didn't know what to call it... Play on words maybe?
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Post  Gielgamesh Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:00 am

Nah.
I think just calling it a story would suffice.
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Post  Yakoel Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:24 pm

well since bloom didn't get on for a couple of days we assumed she quit, so its not me and her anymore. its me and val =P
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Post  RaikuAkioBld Fri Mar 27, 2009 5:58 pm

Well... your a pimp... Again how does the whole PW relationship thing work?? Uber confused...
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Post  Yakoel Fri Mar 27, 2009 11:10 pm

really well for me, but then again, idk how it does. i've known val since about lvl 10 though >.> (but i was a slow lvl'er in the beginning, so i didn't start lving faster till lvl 26+) =P
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Post  RaikuAkioBld Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:06 am

That doesn't help... I mean is it strictly game? of life?
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Post  Gielgamesh Mon Mar 30, 2009 8:28 pm

I imagine that usually, it's just in-game, but some people like to have serious "internet-relationships" which are just bizzare as hell.
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Post  RaikuAkioBld Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:32 am

Thank you Giel... THAT helps.
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Post  Blazinglance Tue Apr 21, 2009 6:22 am

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Post  Yakoel Wed Apr 22, 2009 7:58 am

i love that vid =D + it has 1 of the greatest bands for the song XD

and if u read the comments on the vid, its kinda true for this:

"In this story. I felt like being between the glass with me and my girlfriend. Behind the glass is like being far away from each other. I am feeling sad with the big glass wall between us. I want to tear the glass wall down but I can't. It is impossible! I want to break the glass with my fist and to be with her. It is hard for being apart especially if I wanted to be with her. But at the end, there is always behind the glass. Hopefully someday, the glass wall will break."

and also the fact that i moved that kinda makes it for all my friends not just u guys, my friends at my old school don't have cell phones b/c some of them are low on cash to pay for them, i've only kept in contact w/ 2 of them. Sad and the new school is gay as it is so i only have made like 3 friends there. that makes u guys some of my best.
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Post  Yakoel Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:00 am

and this is my new wallpaper for my comp

If I... (poem) Draw_With_Me__Valentines__by_Mikeinel

the rest of the pic was cut off, but go here if u want to see the whole thing, it cut off the writing

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs40/f/2009/044/a/1/Draw_With_Me__Valentines__by_Mikeinel.jpg
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Post  xValariex Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:14 pm

Oh my god! That Video is sooo sweet! I wish i never watched it though, i'm starting to cry Sad
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Post  Yakoel Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:07 pm

it still makes me get teary-eyed, i sat up for 5 hours after i checked the forum watching it
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